Tuesday, October 7, 2008

They say; Bacons Rebellion

In the articles I have read, there seem to be conflicting views of Nathanial Bacon. In primary document I have read from him, he believes himself a tragic hero, a defender of the poor and unprotected, and a champion of justice. He said himself, "Judge therefore all wise and unprejudiced men...the aspersion of Traitor or Rebell" He plays the long suffering martyr in his own documents.
The other articles I have read aren't so willing to paint him as hero. The Zinn and Stefoff excerpt seem to view him as a misguided leader, witch in every respect he was. The chapter is quoted saying, “He probably cared more about fighting Indians than about helping the poor."It seems implied that these poor white Englishmen had no one else to turn to for reform and protection from the government. The people had multiple r4easons for their unrest, their poverty, the growing distinctions between class, the lack of a middle class, promises of wealth and land that wouldn't be fulfilled, the growing anger at the government for lack of protection, and the racial tension that was building. As the Puglesi article stated, "He [Bacon] claimed that he was providing a release for the colonist’s frustrations." They forgot to mention that killing and plundering innocent Indian villages is hardly a hobby. The documents I have read imply that Bacon had no reason to attack the Indians, and that the attacks against the Doeg and Pamunkey tribes were merely retaliation against Gov. Berkley's crimes. All sources agree thought that Berkley's interesting protecting the Indians, or at least showing a refusal to offend or attack them was not a product of compassion for them. He was simply protecting a source of valuable income, which made the poor settlers even angrier. Their government was neglecting them in order to save or make money. It was hardly any wonder they revolted.

3 comments:

megannn said...

you integrated quotes but try to make them not as obvious as you did by stating things like "the chapter is quoted" and "as the Puglesi article stated. You want to try and make the sentences flow more with out saying an article already 'stated' or 'said' the quotes. your idea for this piece was good it just needs to be expanded and be sure to proof-read your piece before posting it :)

Briana Grosche said...

I somewhat agree with Megan, you had many quotes but I think that there is other more flowing ways to integrate your quotes. Although, the quotes that you did use were very fitting in what you were saying.

I have two suggestions, you don't have to follow or use them but these are things that I might do to improve my writing.

Suggestion number one is that at times during the blog, you said things like "i read" and that type of stuff. You weren't really making it "I say", but leaving out any I's might be more effective in a "They say" essay. My only other suggestion is to put page numbers by your quotes.

Overall, I really liked it and sorry for the long feedback thing. You did really well!

Kitsune said...

You have great vocabulary! Also, you sound intelligently opinionated in your speech.

One thing I did note though was that it seems that you posted up the blog without re-reading it, because there was some spelling errors even something really obvious where you put a number in the middle of a word, so I think you would've noticed that and fixed it if you had re-read it.

Overall though, it was really good, really impressive.